Through Smoke and Bitter Distance, Chapter Four, Special Features

Chapter Four

References:

* Bambi's father is referenced when Dave's inner courage yells at him to get up. In the animated film, the Great Prince yells urgently at Bambi - after the poor deer's been shot and can't get up immediately despite the forest fire coming in fast - to get onto his feet...hooves, to flee from the fire. Dave does have an inner strength to him and I think in times of distress, it will be called upon to get Dave to act. Dave is not a coward.

General:

*More of the mystery continues with the bounty hunters. I needed them to leave the scene to continue this plot point until they could be back for later in the chapter. 

*I didn't want Dave to just be a victim here. Even if he's not at peak condition now, that doesn't mean he's utterly helpless. I think he would want to do something to help those around him. That might mean putting out the fire on some very small areas. And as long as he had that fire extinguisher, it should be used for what it was built for. 

*The fire is part one of the climax - it's reaching higher and higher until either everything is destroyed or saved by a miracle. 

*Charles to the rescue! The flock of airplanes trailing behind him are indeed jets courtesy of the Center for Chaos Containment. There had to be a way for the fire to be put out without relying on a storm randomly passing by or Henry using his powers to bring forth rain. I didn't want to rely on an unknown deus ex machina. When I was thinking about this scenario, I remembered the CCC in the 'Toppat 4 Life' ending. They did establish that a manned mobile unit was floating around the area, which means that the CCC has a base somewhere nearby the military base in the jungle. 

Which also means that if the mobile unit picked up on a giant jungle fire that was quickly spreading, they would need to kill two birds with one stone: stop the fire and keep their organization under wraps. Yes, it is ironic that they made themselves known with a public organization like the military, but knowing the CCC, they're likely to come up with a good cover story to protect themselves. Or perhaps erase memories. Either solution is possible. And in a high stakes scenario like this, Charles and Galeforce aren't going to take the time to question it, only be grateful for it. There is a chance their actions could be classified as a deus ex machina, but under the circumstances that is the Henry Stickmin world, mixed in with an acknowledgment of world building via the 'Toppat 4 Life' ending and the CCC's tendency to dish out unpredictable and radical solutions, this isn't as far-fetched as other options could be.
 

*Dave and Rupert reunited at last! I haven't really focused on Rupert's development in this story - besides a few moments in the second chapter - because there is a larger emphasis on suspense and action vs. characterization in this chapter. But here is the starting point for that to change and we start to see the bond that the friends share. I headcanon that after Dave lost his job and became a museum guard, they kept in touch. At least until Rupert joined the military and Dave was kidnapped by the Toppats. 

*The reason I had Dave be the one to take the bullet to protect himself and Rupert was due to the point I brought up earlier about Dave's courage. Dave is undoubtably soft-spoken and I think he lost some confidence after what happened at the prison, but he hasn't forgotten his police training. That takes a lot of skill to do all that's required to be a police officer, even at the cost of one's own life. This event was also meant to give Rupert his own flashback to another horrible event in which he bore witness to and gave rise to his decision to leave the police force. Almost like a darker side to Dave's own flashback when he first joined the police force in the second chapter. 

Rupert's motivation was to prevent any more mistakes, and after what happened with Johnny, Dave's act of selflessness is enough to push him over the edge and save his life. 

I was originally going to focus more on this flashback in the chapter by drawing comparisons between Johnny and Dave as Rupert's partners, but it would have taken the story onto a whole other tangent. Instead I decided to use it to build up the moment in Rupert's mind - he's shocked by Dave's sudden act and even though he's the one injured and the missing person Rupert was assigned to find, Dave still chooses to act bravely and save Rupert's life. I do love me some irony. 

*The random Toppat woman is now arrested, and meant to finally help bring the climax to its fullest height. I understand I said that she wasn't meant to be any female Toppat in general, and she still isn't. But if I had to choose whom she was supposed to be if I felt like choosing a Toppat, I would go with the Gremlin. For no reason other than she seems like one of the most ruthless Toppats.

*Frog and the Bukowski twins return! Frog was brought in to pose more of a threat (and come back for the post-climax) to the Toppats - the Toppats are immensely outnumbered now, and the twins get to do some saving of their own. I think it's only fair these twins get a small bit of action, and taking down the woman was the perfect fit for them. Goofy as the boys may be, they're still soldiers with a lot of heart for action. 

Random Facts:

*This chapter was so blocky with how much went on here. I do like how it turned out, but hot dog it was quite a lot to unpack. 

Wanderer out!

Restoring the Soul: The Manor's Tales, Chapter Four, Special Features

 Chapter Four

References:

*Henry shares quite a commonality with the Thinker statue by Auguste Rodin. They both have a lot on their minds, but what are they thinking about? They're both puzzles to solve, but in Henry's case, the reference makes him seem more unpredictable and curious to watch in action. 

*The Wizard of Oz is quite generous with his references, such as the apple-throwing trees. The trees in this story might not have thrown apples or eaten kites, but they do come in handy for bringing to life the kind of strange world in which Henry and the gang have landed. 

*The kite-eating tree from the Peanuts comics is legendary even if it didn't get a chance to really shine, but it made for a fun nod and option!

*Marc, Ezra, Gus and Phineas? I've already explained this in my author's notes for this chapter, but the Haunted Mansion and its sister locations have so many connections and Easter eggs to each other and other Disney rides that I like mentioning them.

General:

*Now that we're arriving at Thunder Mesa, I can reveal why I combined the two rides of Big Thunder Mountain Railroad with Thunder Mesa. The reason I combined them both is to both make reference to the lore that is done in the parks proper (they tend to do with various park rides, like the Haunted Mansion for example) and to create a plausible place where the national park could exist as its own land without needing to be tied into a theme park. A theme park would sensibly fit into the wacky side of Henry Stickmin, but as this is a serious take on one of the heavier endings of CTM, this called for a realistic location.

It also helps to further explore the desert where Henry and co. landed after they escaped the airship. Heck, there's a vault out in the middle of nowhere in that desert as well as the CCC and a prison (although with a prison, it's debatably more plausible than a bank vault). There's so much mystery out in the desert, so why not add a former mining town to the mix? And in the American Southwest and the West Coast, ghost towns exist all over the place, so adding that would bring more world-building to the world of Henry Stickmin. 

*The brochure bit was a path to tell the Toppats their location and get Ethan to lead them to the town proper. Its origin is the mid-century to build on both history, which will be seen a lot in this story for both THSC and PM, and to give a nod to Disneyland, the first Disney park which opened in the 1950s. 

*Meet Ranger Ethan Carmichael! He's not a Batman, but an OC created for this story. I needed to have someone who knew the history of Thunder Mesa and could guide our protagonists through out the town as they recover from their journeys. And as Thunder Mesa is a national park, who better to know a park than a park ranger with a cowboy side to him?  

He was named after a famous cowboy named Ethan. For his surname, I needed something that sounded heroic and Carmichael felt fitting. His horse Rooster? A nod to other famous cowboys with their trusty steeds: Roy Rogers and his horse Trigger, Gene Autry and Champion, Tex Rigger and White Flash, the works. He's not one to sleep on the job, but he does have a good side to him, as he is nicer to Dave than the Toppats. 

He also is part of a bigger plot that he himself doesn't seem to realize.... 

*I mentioned in this chapter that I changed the name of the people who worshiped the Thunderbird. According to my research, the Ojibwe worshipped the creature and not the Shoshone.  If I went with the latter, it would have created a problem; if I wanted to make Thunder Mesa a national park that could exist in the HS world setting, the history would not have cut it. The history Disney put forward to explain the Thunderbird's presence is incorrect (which I know they can fudge history up for some of their stories, but I'm not really buying it in this case). 

THSC is fictional in itself, yes, but it's still set in modern times as we know it with real world names of states and countries, and they do also acknowledge real people such as Elvis Presley. I wanted to stick with what THSC did, but still keep to the fictional timeline Phantom Manor produced. I also wanted to explain how and why the Ojibwe were living in the area when in real time, they lived near the Great Lakes. A simple solution - have a small party leave the area to find a warmer climate to live. This would give a sense of realism to the story, and not tweak it too much like Disney Parks!canon did. 

*Yes, there's more than one Henry in this story. And he will play a part in Henry Stickmin's story beyond their commonalities. The reason for the same names is significant, which will come into play later.

*Will we meet the Thunderbird? Is the Thunderbird even real? All good questions. 

Random Facts:

*N/A.  

Wanderer out!